This first draft check list was not bad as I expected. However, I have to point out that outlines in the main body were absolutely misplaced. I just misunderstood to include them in the text.plot!!
In general, the introduction describes quite well the main idea of the essay and shows very briefly the relation between globalisation and gene flow (where I am making focus on) through mobility concerns. Al so a thesis statement is implicit and clear.
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